Voice assignment 5/13

4. Syntax, as you know, is the way words are arranged in sentences.  Look at the first passage.  When describing the behavior of the class, the author uses a series of short sentences with active verbs; the sentence structure is repeated several times.  What effect does this structure and repetition have on the reader? 

One of the effects of the short sentences, with numerous verbs is the reader getting a better idea/understanding of the class. If the author described the class in a format/structure in which he would use a long paragraph, then that would really bore the reader. They'd also be somewhat lost. The short sentences are easier to read and understand. This also helps the story progress further, and not stay on one point for a long time. The short sentences also helps us characterize the class better. Overall, the structure of Excerpt 1 has a good effect on the reader and is easier to understand.

6. What is the tone of each passage?

I believe the tone of the first passage is light-hearted. I think that because the way the author talks/describes the subject is in a rather light, playful manner. It displays the class as rude and uncaring, however, the author doesn't do it excessively/push it too far to change the tone. Even when the new teacher who was displayed as more mean and serious, the tone is still light-hearted. It it is not too serious nor anxious. The tone of the second passage is rather dark and bitter. She's trying to change her identity in rather alarming ways, and it's not working too well. There's no light/humorous tone.

7. Characterize the voice of your creative non-fiction piece

I would say the voice of my piece is light-hearted and somewhat humorous. However, parts of it aren't. It can also sometimes be serious, exploring dark topics. I know this by looking at my piece's content, including its syntax, structure and overall content. I did this purposefully to make my piece look fun to read, yet it also makes you think. This is a strength of my writing piece.